As promised earlier, here come two of my last weekend's kifu with some commentary! Mostly, the comments are based on what the Japanese professionals remarked at the English class last Tuesday. This time, the comments are included in the sgf file!
First up is the only game that I lost last weekend. There's not an awful lot to say about it, though, as much of the opening follow's one of Cho U's and Takao Shinji's Kisei game from this year.
Watch out in the second sgf — at least at move 22, half of the comments aren't instantly shown (you need to scroll down). I'll have to see if it's possible to make the text field bigger.